Would you keep reading?? Fantasy-Horror-Thriller-Advent… sort of novel?

You do a lot of showing and not telling, which was a real turn-off for me. I couldn't actually 'see' what was happening, which was frustrating. Also, 'Evanna' sounds like a high-born name, but her diction is very coarse and common. Improve your general characterization and descriptions and it'll be loads better.